Thursday, June 4, 2009

Novel approach.......

Thoughts and projected time lines.
I have a 15 chapter novel idea with a whole story arc, even the first 38 frames complete i kinda want the first 3 chapters to be orgin story.

having our hero losing his family to the company his father works for. (the family does not know what he does) our hero is given a device from his father right before his father dies.

4-6 he is on his own with his device and AI (side note we need a damn cool name for the voice in his head.) these chapters will be him exploring a huge city with the ability to jump through wormholes. as well as dealing with the company that ruined his family and murdered his parents.

7-9 will be our hero chasing down the man who killed his loved ones reckless atacks to get what he wants. in a great explosion with a machine that can create black holes our hero emerges nearly dead.

10-12 after stoping the company his father worked for being a free person our hero rests only to be interupted by the introduction of his new nemisis Black Hole (once the man who killed his family, he does not remember who he was or even has no idea what he his now) with no knowledge of who he is or who he was he resorts to his attaction to hunt down our hero and destroy his world.

13-15 with Black holes evil plot in place our hero is forced to face him or the rest of his world will cease to exist with our hero having nothing to lose he has to make his first real heroic choice destroy his worl and run or face his exact opposite the one force that can stop him in his tracks.

In these chapters our hero will also become aware that the AI helping him has been hiding truths from him to guarantee its own survial.

our hero will prevail and Black hole will maybe implode and send him self to another galaxy.

either way he will return.

our hero will be stuck on a destroyed earth with out his machine and no AI, good news is he can feel the seconds passing by, i would like to make this battle change him so he can travel with out his machine finish with a line like "all i need is time" with a whole page of a destroyed city and him in the middle of it.
just thoughts its very rough but something that could work really well.
I apologize for any spelling errors

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